The Second Draft - Volume 34, No. 1
Using Demand Letters to Teach Persuasion and Professionalism DOWNLOAD PDFApril 22, 2021
Of the many types of correspondence that lawyers write, demand letters are one of the most common, but demand letter assignments seldom appear in legal writing courses. Adding a demand letter to a legal writing course creates opportunities for the professor to reinforce persuasive writing skills, to discuss ethics and professional responsibility, and to teach professionalism and civility. This essay walks through these benefits and discusses how a professor can add a demand letter assignment to an existing course.
Demand letters reinforce persuasive writing skills.
Demand letters are an easy addition to a legal-writing course, whether a first-year or an upper-level course. They are typically short documents, meaning that they are not overly burdensome for a student to write—or for a professor to grade. Demand letters fit best in the curriculum of the persuasive-writing semester of a required first-year curriculum or in any upper-level course that includes persuasive writing or a variety of practice documents.
Demand letters provide an opportunity for students to practice their persuasive-writing skills in a related but slightly different context than writing motions or briefs. One of the most important skills that professors can teach is how skills
The easiest way for a professor to add a demand letter to her curriculum is to base it on an existing fact pattern in the course. For example, if students are writing a trial-court motion, have the students draft a demand letter to opposing counsel using the same assignment facts. In this way, the assignment creates very little additional work for the professor. The demand letter need not be assigned before the motion. The professor can explain that for academic purposes, the assignment is not following a realistic litigation timeline (as our assignments rarely do anyway, when they have to be compressed into a single semester).
A demand-letter assignment also provides an opportunity for the professor to talk about problem solving, which is an essential aspect of lawyering, but one that is often not discussed explicitly in the legal-writing curriculum. For example, one of us (Alyssa) has previously tasked her students to write a demand letter to a commercial landlord on behalf of a day spa dealing with a noisy neighboring tenant. She encouraged her students to be creative in what they asked the landlord to do. After the students submitted their assignments, the class discussed the various options. The best students asked the landlord to soundproof the walls between the two tenants. Assuming this is physically possible, this is likely to be preferred as the best option by the landlord and both tenants. But many students thought only of asserting the spa’s right to move out of the space, citing constructive eviction. While this is a valid legal claim, it would cost the spa substantially more money, and the spa might prefer to keep its current location if it has built up a large number of regular clients. No student grades were affected by the failure to think of this option, but it provided space for a rich class discussion.
An additional benefit to teaching demand letters is that students learn how to properly format a letter. Letter writing appears to be a lost art for many Generation Z students. Many need to learn relatively simple guidelines, such as how to format the recipient information on a letter and how to indicate that another person has been sent a copy of the letter. Of course, many “letters” today are actually sent via email, but they are often still formatted as mailed correspondence.
Demand letters allow exploration of related ethical issues.
In addition to providing an opportunity for students to practice their persuasive-writing skills, demand letters create a natural pathway toward incorporating questions of professional identity and legal ethics into a writing course. A professor may choose to deliberately facilitate a discussion of the ethical issues pertaining to demand letters, or such a discussion may arise organically from students’ questions. In either circumstance, legal-writing professors can benefit from being able to address their students’ frequently asked ethical questions.
Ann has taught more than 70 ethics CLEs, and these are the questions that attorneys ask most frequently about demand letters. The information below should provide sufficient background for professors to answer student questions and bring ethical issues to the forefront of students’ attention.
Is a lawyer allowed to send a demand letter directly to the opposing party?
If the opposing party is represented by counsel, a lawyer cannot send a demand letter directly to that party.
A few key points: First, only the opposing party’s counsel has the authority to allow direct contact; the party’s permission alone will not suffice. Second, in many states, sending a letter concurrently to the opposing party and opposing counsel violates the
If the opposing party is not represented by counsel,
Do lawyers have a duty of candor when writing demand letters? Are lawyers allowed to exaggerate or bluff as a settlement tactic?
Perceptive students will note that in the
Although different ethical rules apply to communications outside the courtroom, lawyers have a general obligation to be truthful in conduct both
A professor seeking a short answer to this complex issue could explain that the norms of negotiation do permit a certain amount of “puffery,” citing some examples from Comment 2 to Rule 4.1. However, the professor should emphasize that lawyers can never “puff” about material facts—
At what point does a permissible demand become an unethical threat?
In the quest to zealously advocate a client’s position, students may come up with creative ways to compel settlement. For instance, public shaming through social media is nowadays both rampant and effective. Students may assume that threatening to “make public” an opposing party’s misdeeds is a legitimate tactic.
But this is likely impermissible under
A more complex situation is a demand-letter assignment that raises both criminal and civil potential liability. A professor can teach students to look first at the relationship between the alleged criminal conduct and the civil dispute. If the two are essentially unrelated, then using potential criminal charges as leverage in a civil settlement would violate the ethical rules. For instance,
But perhaps an assignment’s facts give rise to related claims of both civil and criminal liability. For instance, students may be representing a landlord suing a former tenant for intentional damage to a rental unit in a state where this conduct could also amount to criminal mischief. In some states, simply stating the possibility of criminal liability as a fact with no threat or promise attached would fall within ethical boundaries.
The waters are murkier when it comes to explicit threats to pursue, or offers to refrain from pursuing, criminal charges in exchange for civil settlement.
Nonetheless, professors should advise students that a lawyer rarely encounters a clear-cut situation when it comes to threatening criminal prosecution. Even in states with no per se prohibition,
Demand letters teach professionalism and civility.
Finally, demand letters offer an opportunity to discuss concepts related to civility in the profession. Most states have some form of
When discussing professionalism in relation to demand letters, the baseline should always be adherence to the ethical principles discussed above. Beyond that, the professor may choose to facilitate a discussion regarding the meaning of “zealous” advocacy.
A demand-letter assignment creates rich learning opportunities without a heavy resource demand on the professor. Weaving a demand letter into an existing advocacy assignment reinforces persuasive-writing skills while opening the door to a thoughtful discussion of ethics, civility, and professionalism.
To learn more about the substance of demand letters and the related ethical issues, we recommend the following resources.
- Wayne Schiess, Writing for the Legal Audience (2d ed. 2014), Chapter 6: Writing to Opposing Counsel.
- Alexa Chew & Katie Rose Guest Pryal, The Complete Legal Writer (2016), Chapter 12: Demand Letter.
- Jason Dykstra, Govern Yourself Accordingly: Crafting Effective Demand Letters, The Advocate, Nov./Dec. 2017, at 50.
- Peter H. Geraghty, Making Threats, YourABA (Oct. 2008), http://anyflip.com/sfej/jswb/basic.
- Allison Martin, Six Tips for Writing Effective Demand Letters, Res Gestae 28 (Oct. 2013).
- Terry Carter, SHUT UP! The Art and Craftiness of Cease-and-Desist Letters, 104 A.B.A. J. 54 (July 2018).